If I was a star,
a star without a flame,
would I still be
your love, all the same?
If I was the sky,
the sky without clouds,
would I still be
one who makes you proud?
If I was a tree,
a tree without fruit,
would I still be
your favorite pursuit?
If I was a flower,
a flower without petals,
would I still be
your source of mettle?
If I was a bird,
a bird without wings,
would I still be
your favorite thing?
If I was a person,
a person without friends,
would I still be
yours until the end?
Would you still love me?
Would you still care?
Would you still promise
to always be there?
Would you still be mine?
Would I still be yours?
Would I, still?
45 comments:
I also enjoy writing poetry.
Your writing is beautiful
Hey, I like the blog.
LOL Brady and saul. This is pretty cool but they way you do it with it going back and forth was a little bit confusing for me.
You know what creed is? that band i though had died a long time ago. crazy.
i feel the anguish in your voice, and i am sad that you feel like you have nothing to offer and are afraid that people leave you. We often worry about these things, but realize the friends that stick with you in hard times are the ones you want forever. i hope that a few friends will be like that for you.
AWW UR GONNA MAKE ME CRY BR!!!
that was rele good! too bad ur friend RavenCross isnt that deep LOL i saw his blog and its funny!
and i think u kno saul..bc u two always comment on each others blogs...hmmmm so is this poem to RavenCross or SAUL??? hmm lol
well fine! u and saul go off on ur merry way and go write poetry together! see if i(or heather) care! poor heather, well i dont want to be the one to break the bad news to her...lol saul u better comment on heathers blog to make her feel speshal LOL
and a bird w/o wings WOULD be pretty useless...lol jk
cool poem
ok....waaaaiiiittt a minute!!!
fred, that was really deep-even for u! i think U are saul mister!
and wats w/ saul crushing on BR all of a sudden?? SAUL! HEATHER LIKES U!! NOT BR! I DONT EVEN KNO IF BR KNOS U EXIST!! HAHA jk she does bc i think ive seen coments on ur blog from her...well watever. poor heather. :(( LOL
I am glad to have met someone who also enjoys poetry. My friend Kobay doesn't like to read at all. Thank you greatly for complimenting my artistic words. Writing poetry is truly something I love to do. Any skill that I might have, could never meet yours. Everything you write has a deeper meaning. Your words are magnificent, Saul. I am glad you like my 'blog Kayzar. My apologies for confusing you B.J.. "Creed" is a very good and very alive band, Fred. Thank you for feeling concerned, but there is no need to feel sad for me. I am perfectly happy. I do not want anyone to feel sorrow or sadness. You are absolutely right, Fred. Friends who stand by you through the hardest of times, are the friends you should hold close forever. Thank you. I do have a friend like that, and I enjoyed reading what you had to say. I'm glad my words spoke to you, Rachael. I do not know Saul. Why would this poem be for either Saul or Kobay? Are you implying that I like one of them? I don't think Saul feels like running away. He seems very successful where he is right now. Saul and Fred do have similar looking 'blogs.
Saul has a crush on me? I don't think so. Someone like Saul must already be taken.
niiiiiiiiice poem KV! U PWN! XD U PWN OUT LOUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my fav is still dat other one..............ya kno......................that other one...........i forgot wat it's called......................................
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WHOAH! DUDE! U THINK SHE'S GOIN TA RUN AWAY WIT SAUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HECKS NO!......................is this poem for one of us?....................are u diggin on one of us???????????? DUDE.............SAUL! why da heck r u hittin on KV!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.........MUST ALREADY B TAKEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WUT'S THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN?????????????????.................KV.............WUT'S UP WIT U AN SAUL????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
No I don't want to run away, and no I'm not taken.
So if there are any takers.....
TAKERS?????????????????????? I DON'T THINK SO MR. PHREAK! DX
u best watch yo back dude! DX
Kobay, if you gave an effort, I'm sure you could get along with Saul. It wasn't nice of you to threaten him, and your insults are unnecessary. Please do not be angry at me when I see you next weekend. I know the poem you are talking about. Saul please forgive Kobay, for he often speaks impulsively.
lol its "all in good fun!" riiiiight kobay? wiat, is it kobey or kobay??? idk sorry dude LOL
and saul doesnt have a choice-hes taken by heather haha jk
and sorry if i meant anything like that-i was unsure if u and kobey were together or not....
thats cool that u like poetry...cuz not many ppl do. u'd definatly pass my english class!! lol :DDD
His name is Kobe, Rachael, but "Kobay" is his user name on Blogger. I thought Saul and Heather were dating. Kobay and I are not dating. We are simply best friends. It feels so great to know there are fans of my poetry.
I'm starting to think Kobay is defending his love aka BR lol you never know........
And I accept your apology BR but you really didn't need to say sorry I was just saying what I was thinking is pretty cool other wise.
Yea Kobay that insult calling Saul a freak was worthless and you probably could get along with him if you tried
And yes Heather and Saul are dating but would rather that everyone not know right now bc they are just starting to break the ice so to say in their relationship aka midnight walks saul singing under her window fancy love letters ect. You name it and it's probably going to happen if it already hasn't.
LOL JK
If I left anything out tell me and I'll reply to that too.
Shall I compare the to a summer's day?
Jeez get over it you lovestruck moose!
Huh how am I a love struck moose ??? That doesn't make sense to me bc I'm not a moose!!!! DUH
Because you're so obsessed with girls, get a freaking girlfriend already!
Kobay does not like me. He has a crush on a popular girl at his school. Thank you, B.J., I am glad you think my poetry is cool. I believe Saul was referring to a movie B.J., not you. Very funny Saul. Do you like Heather? Does everyone here pick on B.J.?
Your Welcome BR. And not every one picks on me Rachael, Rachel, Brady and Saul are the only ones who pick on me on blogger.
And Saul I'm not obsessed with girls so get that through your mind. And why get a GF they cost you money you have to pay for the movie's and stuff and I don't have enough money top do that right now.
And I don't think Saul has a choice when it come to Heather!!!! Saul is Heathers and if any one trys to hit on Saul Heather will get hecka mad at them.
Heather's my fan, but by the sound of it I've got more than one.....
Yes everyone picks on B.J. so get in line.
Stop trying to make me dates B.J.
B.J.,B.J., (shakes his head) I don't know what to do with you. You obviously like girls and yet you're scared to death of them. Leech some money off your parents and take one of them to a movie. Take Emily! Or whoever else. (It has to be someone around your age though, don't go more than 2 years in either direction.)
Hey Heather like's you bc well umm bc she's Heather.
And not everyone picks on me here are a few that don't pick on my ( well atl east I hope they don't when I'm not looking) : Michael,Katie,Bess ( lol ) thats all I can think of for now.
And I'm not trying to get you a date Saul.
Do you know how hard it is to get my mom/dad to give me money to buy some hockey tape ??? Well since you don't know I'll have to say that it's going to be like 10 times harder to get money for a date then a roll of hockey tape. And why would I take Emily??? And how am I scared of girls ?? Well I'm not scared of them!
You're scared of everybody knowing you like girls, this isn't elementery school anymore pal.
Hmm I am am I hmm I don't think I'm scared of them.
why dont u get a girlfriend already, saul! or do u have one??!! hmmm!!!???
ok bj, first of all-if u really like her, then shes worth spending money on! geez!
but the saul and heather thing is true haha ...or at least it was...lol
but its sad that hockey tape comes first to girls....tisk tisk i agree w/ saul...wat r we gonna do w/ u LOL
and admit it bj, ur scared of me. hah!
Really like who Rachael??? And hockey tape doesn't come first I was saying if i have trouble getting $3.75 off my parents how much harder is it going to be to get $20. I'll admit I'm not scared of you Rachael!!!!!
akk cough hahahaha *splutter* B.J. not afraid of Racheal, hahahahaha!
We are sitting in rows of seats before an open stage. We are amused by the act taking place in front of us. Everyone is laughing and having a good time, and B.J. is the comedian.
Why do I have to be the comedian I'm not that funny.... am I ????
Hahahahahahahaha.
At least Saul has a sense of humor.
Hmm no he doesn't he is someone who has nothing better to do then pick on me....
I am sorry, B.J.. I, too, know how it feels to be ridiculed. Even if it is only for laughs, it can still hurt. My apologies if I offended you.
Hey you didn't offend me I'm just wondering why you guys are calling me a comedian.
It was not very thoughtful of me, but I was making a joke referring to how the others get a kick out of laughing at you. Even though it is unintentional, it is almost as if you are a comedian.
Oh ok I get it now... A funny thing happened yesterday I have a friend named Chris and he said I reminded him of a comedian so I guess I could be one...
Maybe you will become a comedian, B.J.. Who knows what God has in store for you?
yea I guess I could end up being one. The only person tat knows what God has in store for me is God.
hehe! BJ a comedian??? no...hez gonna be a pilot! @DDD
<3 for everywun!!!!!!! "^.^"
Yeah go Air Force!!!!!!
yeh foozles!!! XD go airforce! XD
Lol Kobey!!
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