It was taken from me for doing no wrong.
I thought my heart would never again piece back together.
I was certainly doomed to remain broken forever.
Nothing is all that I lived for.
Completely hopeless and nothing more.
I decided right then and there:
never again would love I share.
never again would love I share.
Then you came and my world began to spin,
as my heart fell in love all over again.
There were so many things I wanted to feel,
and then you caught me head over heals.
I give you my love. Take it all.
Let it build you up and make you feel tall.
I give all my love to you, my Love.
The look I gave could only mean one thing.
My legs became weak and into your arms I fell.
When I opened my eyes, it was me you were holding.
I wanted to confess, but my love for you I would never tell.
as my heart fell in love all over again.
There were so many things I wanted to feel,
and then you caught me head over heals.
I give you my love. Take it all.
Let it build you up and make you feel tall.
I give all my love to you, my Love.
The look I gave could only mean one thing.
My legs became weak and into your arms I fell.
When I opened my eyes, it was me you were holding.
I wanted to confess, but my love for you I would never tell.
10 comments:
WHY COULDNT U TELL UR LOVE U LOVE HIM????? *GASP* it IS kobey isnt it???? I KNEW IT!!!! LOL but seriously....who is "ur love"?
saul?? haha jk more like the other way around....
but seriously...there must be like a "secret-learn-how-to-be-mysterious-and-poetic" school or somthing bc u and sauls words sound the same...
maybe they are both the same person O_o jk i stopped wondering who these ppl are a long time ago
Actually, this poem is for no one. I wrote this poem for someone in my dreams, before I ever met Kobay. It was one of my first poems. Who is "my Love"? My Love is someone very fuzzy right now. I thought I found the one who God knows is right for me, but now I am not sure. Love is a very powerful and complex emotion. One moment you have love and everything is wonderful, and the next, love is gone and everything hurts.
Excellent writing - you've got quite a talent. Keep it up! God bless =)
Thank you, Josh. I appriciate your compliment. God bless you, too.
Hmm this is pretty good too.
umm whos josh? he sounds cool i guess...even though we dont kno him...but then again, we dont kno u...or do we??? O_o haha wait, so u DONT go to our church? u sure? hmm well ur still cool! u should come to our church sometime :DDD
Josh is a cool person, however, I have sadly never met him. I do not attend your church, but I would love to visit as soon as I can. It would be wonderful to meet you in person.
whoa! that would be crazy to meet yu!!! come to church! i hope ill be ther... 888D
<3 for everywun!!!!!!! "^.^"
oh yah!! here's my favorite poem of KVs!!!!..........spooky...........it reminds meh of dat time u actually fainted..................
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